Eleniel Alarie, Ex-Jedi, now Sith Apprentice

So, I ended up doing four slightly different versions of this piece of Eleniel! A cartoon style illustration and a comic style illustration with two different lightsaber colors each! That’s a good chance to make a direct comparison between two of my styles. :)
And about Eleniel:
Character Name: Eleniel Alarie, Ex-Jedi, now Sith Apprentice
Eleniel was born out of a forbidden love between her sephi mother, a noble woman from Isobe, Thustra and a male human, a Jedi visiting on behalf of the (Old) Republic. Taken at a young age to train with the Jedi, which ended poorly and with her exile from the Order due to her attachments to her family and the desire to have a real family. This drove a deep hatred for the Jedi and led to her being found by a female Sith, Darth Mah'brethir, Sith Pureblood, who would become her master. Darth Mah'brethir was on the Dark Council of the Sith Empire. In time Eleniel carried out diplomatic missions for the Sith Empire and when the Second Great War started she